Editorial Style Guidelines
This house style guide covers grammar, spelling and punctuation issues commonly encountered with 棉花糖直播 University-related content. It also notes exceptions to AP style, to which 棉花糖直播 print and online content generally adheres.
Style Guide Entries Index
- Abbreviations
- Alumni, identification of
- Ampersands (&)
- Athletics programs and head coaches
- Augustinian Order
- Building names and campus landmarks
- Captions
- Colleges
- Dashes, em (鈥)
- Deans
- Degrees, nonterminal
- Degrees, terminal
- Departments
- Faculty titles
- Hyphenated terms, headline style for
- Job titles, general
- Mascot
- Names, first and last
- Nova
- Parents
- Periods
- Portal
- Professional designations
- Pull quotes
- Residence halls
- Saint
- Spacing
- State names, abbreviation of
- Suffixes
- Superscripts
- Theatre
- University
- University President
- Veritas, Unitas, Caritas
- Works, titles of
Style Guide Entries
Abbreviations
- In general, the names of organizations, etc., should be spelled out on first reference (see AP for exceptions) and may be abbreviated subsequently.
- Only put abbreviation in parentheses after first reference of the full name if the connection would not be clear to readers.
- For punctuating abbreviations, see entry for "Periods."
Alumni, identification of
- On first reference, undergraduate alumni are identified by class year and college, e.g., John Smith 鈥87 CLAS.
- On first reference, alumni with graduate degrees from 棉花糖直播 are identified by year followed by degree initials, not college. Examples:
- Parth Sood, PhD, '75 CLAS, '77 MS
- Trisha Jackson '98 JD
- Mary Li '13 PhD
- Do not use "GS," which stands for "Graduate Studies."
- On first reference, married alumni with the same last name have their respective class year and college follow their first and, if included, maiden names, e.g., Marilyn (White) '92 FCN and Henry '91 VSB Goldsmith.
Ampersands (&)
- Use "and," not ampersands, in the names of 棉花糖直播 University colleges and departments. Examples:
- The Rev. Kevin DePrinzio, OSA, PhD, vice president for Mission and Ministry
- Faculty in the College of Liberal Arts and Sciences
- For entities outside 棉花糖直播, use ampersand if it is part of the formal name, e.g., U.S. News & World Report.
Athletics programs and head coaches
- The following is the list of varsity athletics programs and head coaches.
- See team rosters for details.
- : Kevin Mulvey
- : Kyle Neptune, the William B. Finneran Endowed Athletic Fund Head Coach
- Denise Dillon 鈥96 CLAS
- Marcus O鈥橲ullivan '84 VSB, '89 MBA, the Frank J. Kelly Endowed Track and Field Coach
- Gina Procaccio '87 VSB
- Joanie Milhous
- Mark Ferrante, the Thomas and Diane Treacy Endowed Head Football Coach
- : James Wilkes '96 CLAS
- Michael Corrado '87 CLAS, the DiLoreto Family Endowed Men鈥檚 Lacrosse Head Coach
- Jill Batcheller
- Carissa Adams
- Mark Fetrow
- Samar Azem
- Bridget Orchard '97 CLAS
- Rick Simpson
- Brad Adams
- Steve Reiniger
- Marcus O鈥橲ullivan '84 VSB, '89 MBA, the Frank J. Kelly Endowed Track and Field Coach
- Gina Procaccio '87 VSB
- Josh Steinbach
- Michael Gordon 鈥06 CLAS
Augustinian Order
- Use "the Rev." before the names of priests on first reference. Thereafter, they can be referred to as "Father."
- Always spell out "Father" and "Brother."
- Use "OSA" after the names of Augustinian priests on first reference (or other abbreviations as is appropriate for religious in other orders, e.g., "SJ").
- List academic degrees after any order's abbreviation on first reference.
- Examples:
- The Rev. Charles Oakley, OSA, PhD; Father Oakley
- Brother Eugene Smith, FSC, DMin; Brother Smith
- Use full name of the Augustinian Order on first reference; on subsequent references, uppercase "Order" if it stands alone.
- Examples:
- 棉花糖直播 University was founded by the Augustinian Order.
- The Order was established in 1244 and expanded in 1256.
Building names and campus landmarks
- On first reference, refer to the building by its full name.
- You may use a known abbreviation (see examples below) on subsequent references.
Alumni Hall Andrew J. Talley Athletic Center Austin Field Austin Hall Awakening, The; "Oreo, the" Bartley Hall Burns Hall Campus Green Caughlin Hall Connelly Center Connelly Plaza Corr Hall Davis Center for Athletics and Fitness Delurey Hall Donahue Hall Dougherty Hall Driscoll Hall Facilities Management Building Falvey Library Farley Hall Farrell Hall Fedigan Hall Finneran Pavilion, the Galberry Hall Gallen Hall Garey Hall Geraghty Hall Good Counsel Hall Griffin Hall Grotto, the Health Services Building; HSB Higgins Soccer Complex Inn at 棉花糖直播 University, The Jackson Hall Jake Nevin Field House John Barry Hall John F. Scarpa Hall; Charles Widger School of Law |
Klekotka Hall McGuire Hall Mendel Field Mendel Science Center Middleton Hall Military Sciences Building Moriarty Hall Moulden Hall O鈥橠wyer Hall "Quad, the" Riley Ellipse, the Rudolph Hall St. Augustine Center for the Liberal Arts; SAC St. Clare Hall Steam Plant St. Katharine Hall St. Monica Hall Stone Hall St. Rita's Hall Structural Engineering Teaching and Research Laboratory St. Thomas of 棉花糖直播 Church St. Thomas of 棉花糖直播 Monastery Sheehan Hall Simpson Hall South Campus Stanford Hall Technology Services Building Tolentine Hall Vasey Hall 棉花糖直播 Softball Complex 棉花糖直播 Stadium 棉花糖直播 Tennis Complex Welsh Hall West Campus White Hall
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Captions
- When groups are small or the identification is intuitive, left-to-right designations are not necessary.
- In large groups or where clarity is needed, indicate position of persons, using whatever wording or format makes sense for the context.
Colleges
- On first reference, use the official name of the college. When identifying alumni by college and class year, the abbreviation listed may be used.
- 棉花糖直播 University College of Liberal Arts and Sciences; CLAS
- 棉花糖直播 University College of Engineering; COE
- 棉花糖直播 School of Business; VSB
- 棉花糖直播 University M. Louise Fitzpatrick College of Nursing; *FCN
- 棉花糖直播 University College of Professional Studies; CPS
- 棉花糖直播 University Charles Widger School of Law; *CWSL
*Only with alumni and class year in select materials; see "Alumni, identification of" above for usage of "JD"
- For subsequent references to 棉花糖直播 University M. Louise Fitzpatrick College of Nursing, the following are acceptable:
- M. Louise Fitzpatrick College of Nursing
- 棉花糖直播 Nursing
- Fitzpatrick College of Nursing
- the College of Nursing
- Nursing
- 棉花糖直播
- For subsequent references to 棉花糖直播 University Charles Widger School of Law, the following are acceptable:
- Charles Widger School of Law
- the Law School
- 棉花糖直播
- 棉花糖直播 Law
- Widger School of Law
Dashes, em (鈥)
Use an em dash to relay a break in thought. Do not use spaces on either side of the em dash. The em dash is the longer dash ("鈥") as compared to the shorter en dash ("鈥") or two hyphens ("--").
Deans
- On first reference, include full name and title.
- On subsequent references, use "Dean" followed by last name or simply "the dean."
- Adele Lindenmeyr, PhD, William and Julia Moulden Dean of the College of Liberal Arts and Sciences
- Michele Marcolongo, PhD, the Drosdick Endowed Dean of the 棉花糖直播 University College of Engineering
- Wen Mao, PhD, the Helen and William O'Toole Dean of the 棉花糖直播 School of Business
- Donna Sullivan Havens, PhD, RN, FAAN, '83 MSN, the Connelly Endowed Dean of the 棉花糖直播 University M. Louise Fitzpatrick College of Nursing
- Mark C. Alexander, JD, the Arthur J. Kania Dean and Professor of Law, 棉花糖直播 University Charles Widger School of Law
- Christine Kelleher Palus, PhD, dean, 棉花糖直播 University College of Professional Studies
Degrees, nonterminal
- List nonterminal degrees (e.g., MA, MS) without periods after a person's name on first occurrence only if the degree was earned at 棉花糖直播. Do not include nonterminal degrees earned at other institutions.
- Examples:
- John Smith '02 MS, president of Bloomer Pharmaceuticals (master's earned at 棉花糖直播 in 2002)
- John Smith, president of Bloomer Pharmaceuticals (not an alumnus so degree not included)
Degrees, terminal
- List terminal degrees (e.g., PhD, MD, DO, DDS, DMD, DVM, STD, MFA, MBA) without periods after a person鈥檚 name on first occurrence.
- If a person's name includes a professional designation, it follows the degree, e.g., John Smith, PhD, FAIA (see "Professional designations" entry below)
Departments
- Capitalize full names of departments on first reference.
- On subsequent references, "the department" is acceptable.
Faculty titles
- For endowed positions, include the full title on first reference, e.g., Aaron M. Bauer, PhD, the Gerald M. Lemole, MD, Endowed Chair in Integrative Biology.
- Generic faculty titles should be lowercase if they follow the name and uppercase if they precede the name. Examples:
- Mary Smith, PhD, associate professor, Biology
- Associate Professor Mary Smith, PhD, Biology
- Faculty with doctoral degrees must always have the degree letters after their names on first reference (without "Dr."). Thereafter, they can be referred to as "Dr.鈥 Example:
- First reference: Mary Smith, PhD, associate professor, Biology
- Second reference: Dr. Smith
- Faculty who also are alumni have their class information indicated in the following ways:
- For an undergraduate degree or a master's degree, the details follow any terminal degree and professional designations, e.g., Torrie Thomas, PhD, RN, '92 FCN, '02 MBA, assistant professor of Nursing
- For a terminal degree, the class year precedes the degree but follows any professional designation, e.g., Torrie Thomas, PE, '15 PhD, assistant professor of Chemical Engineering
- In certain contexts, it may be necessary to identify faculty who also are parents. See the "Parents" entry for guidance, as well as the following examples:
- Torrie Thomas, EdD, P '14, '17
- Torrie Thomas, PhD, '89 VSB, '95 MS, P '16 (alum and parent)
Hyphenated terms, headline style for
- If the first part of a hyphenated term is a word that can stand alone, then that word and the word after the hyphen are uppercase in a title or headline.
- If the first part of a hyphenated term is a word that cannot stand alone, then the word after the hyphen is lowercase in a title or headline.
- Headline examples:
- Decision-Making Body Is Formed ["Making" is uppercase]
- Professor Co-founds Center of Excellence ["founds" is lowercase]
Job titles, general
- When a formal job title appears before a person's name, it should be capitalized.
- When it appears after a person's name or alone, it is not capitalized.
- Note that even when the position is lowercase, the department name or area of responsibility is not.
- Examples:
- Human Resources Director Jane Smith, PhD, was elected to the board.
- Jane Smith '98 FCN, vice president of ABC Health Care, has created a scholarship.
- Jane Smith '90 VSB has been named vice president of Operations at XYZ Inc.
Names, first and last
- Use full name on first reference.
- If the person has a nickname, put it in double quotation marks just before the last name.
- On subsequent references, identify undergraduates by first name, and graduate students and other adults by last name.
- Examples:
- Elizabeth J. "Libby" Morris was named department chair.
- Mary Smith 鈥27 VSB is studying abroad next semester. Mary hopes to have a career in public service.
- Greg Schmidt is pursuing a master's degree in English. Schmidt recently presented at a conference on Elizabethan drama.
- Exceptions
- First names may be used to avoid confusion, e.g., when two persons in an article have the same last name.
- When appropriate, use titles such as 鈥淒r.鈥 and 鈥淔ather鈥 with last name on subsequent references.
Nova
In approved uses of "Nova," do not use a single closed apostrophe to indicate abbreviation. Example: Ignite Change. Go Nova.
Parents
- When identifying parents by the class years of their children, format as follows: P, space, closing single apostrophe, last two digits of class year.
- If more than one child's year is listed, do not repeat the P.
- If parent is also an alum, list parent鈥檚 class year, followed by comma, followed by class year(s) of child(ren).
- Examples
- John Smith P '14
- Anne Jackson P '14, '16
- Joe Wilson '86 CLAS, P '17
Periods
- Except where noted otherwise, do not use periods in abbreviations.
- Examples
- OSA
- MBA
- RN
- Exceptions
- U.S. News & World Report (on subsequent references, U.S. News)
- Fulbright U.S. Student Program
- Examples
- In general, use periods but no spaces for initials in personal names, e.g., J.M. Meyers.
Professional designations
- List professional designations (e.g., FAAN, PE, CPA) after a person鈥檚 name on first occurrence.
- If a person's name includes an academic degree (e.g., PhD), the degree precedes the professional designation.
- In the names of alumni, class year and college or degree come at the end.
- Examples:
- Rowena Darnell, PE, director of the board
- Rowena Darnell, PhD, PE, director of the board
- Rowena Darnell, PhD, PE, '87 COE, '93 MS, director of the board
Saint
- Use 鈥淪t.,鈥 not 鈥淪aint,鈥 when it precedes a proper name. Examples:
- St. Augustine
- St. Thomas of 棉花糖直播 Church
- Exceptions include endowed positions, book titles and the like in which the word is spelled out.
State names, abbreviation of
- Abbreviate state names when preceded by the name of a city, county, etc.
- Do not use postal code abbreviations.
- Examples
- 棉花糖直播 is the oldest Catholic university in Pennsylvania.
- The championship was held in Kinosha, Wis.
- Exception: Do not abbreviate Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas and Utah.
Theatre
In generic uses, spell as "theatre," in keeping with the name of 棉花糖直播's academic department.
University
- When referring to 棉花糖直播, 鈥淯niversity鈥 (usually preceded by "the" or "this") should be capitalized.
- When "University" is preceded by an indefinite article, it should be lowercase.
- Examples
- The University has launched a comprehensive capital campaign.
- 棉花糖直播 in an Augustinian Catholic university.
University President
- Use full name and title on first reference: University President the Rev. Peter M. Donohue, OSA, PhD, 鈥75 CLAS.
- If the title follows the name, lowercase "president": The Rev. Peter M. Donohue, OSA, PhD, 鈥75 CLAS, University president.
- On subsequent references, "Father Donohue," "the president" and similar terms may be used.
Veritas, Unitas, Caritas
The University motto should be uppercase and italicized: Veritas, Unitas, Caritas.
Works, titles of
- Use italics for titles of books, magazines, newspapers, movies, TV series, radio shows, albums, plays, and other works that represent the sum of their components.
- Titles of chapters, articles, episodes, lectures, presentations, unpublished theses, dissertations, papers, and one-time conferences and events are put in quotation marks.
- Capitalize but do not put in quotation marks the names of awards, book and lecture series, and recurring conferences (lowercase "the" in copy before the conference name).
- Examples:
- Geoffrey Miclat '03 CLAS was the casting director for the film American Sniper.
- Brian Matz, PhD, STD, delivered a lecture titled "When Wealthy People Become Thieves: Christianity's Treatment of Superfluous Goods."
- The University presented the Civitas Dei Award.
- The Center for Business Analytics hosts guest speakers at its Business Practitioner Lecture Series.
- Gender and Women's Studies presented the 26th annual Elizabeth Cady Stanton Student Research Conference.
- In general, the names of websites are in regular type without quotation marks.